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Are you alluding to me?

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05-19-2012, 02:34 PM (This post was last modified: 05-19-2012, 02:35 PM by billy.)

i think it was given what it is Wink

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this for me is a great great senryu.
thanks for the smile. Smile

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just leave a space between the last word and the Hysterical

Hysterical

to get

Hysterical

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The Dog's Bollocks.

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05-23-2012, 10:14 AM

You clever mofo Big Grin

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PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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