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Duties (senryu)

Duties (senryu)
billy Offline
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#1
05-23-2012, 05:51 AM
it's 4.50 am here (in the phil) and it's time for breakfast.

nice play on board. i like it's contemporerity Smile
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addy Offline
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#2
05-23-2012, 09:55 AM
Heh Smile. A nice laid-back piece.
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#3
07-13-2012, 09:51 AM
Clever and a cute play on words.
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#4
07-15-2012, 08:01 AM
Nice quip Smile
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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