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08-16-2012, 04:29 PM (This post was last modified: 08-20-2012, 05:16 PM by billy.)
water spout at sea
we pull up the fishing nets--
my first humpback whale
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08-20-2012, 03:43 PM
I find the last line very amusing. Nice haikuSmile
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08-20-2012, 05:16 PM
i miss spelt the effing wale Big Grin
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