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thunder claps outside
shutters rattle on the house-
dog scratches his ear
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Haha
. Aww, i like this one
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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thanks for the kind words guys.
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(09-12-2012, 12:13 PM)billy Wrote: thunder claps outside
shutters rattle on the house-
dog scratches his ear
I love the last line. The dog is so blase about it all.
I think that "outside" and "on the house" are obvious and don't need to be stated.
