A Natural Performer.
#1
don't worry about the pic's size, we have a fit the page function on the site for them

i'd say it's a good senryu that could also be a good haiku Smile

the words work really well with the pic. i wouldn't change a thing. with this, you captured more than a photo Wink

i moved it to the haiku senryu forum, /blly
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#2
beautiful picture and words enjoyed
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#3
Beautifully rendered. It's perfect.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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#4
I can't work out how i get to view the picture Sad
Particularly liked the immagery of a painted backdrop
Nice
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