Cropped

[billy]

rain falls on ploughed fields
bleached bones litter surface
Cambodian journey.

[Leanne]

A vivid, haunting image. "are" might be a wasted word in the first line -- maybe the (something) fields ploughed or the fields ploughed and (something) (yes, something, that's my adjective for the day.)

[billy]

thanks for the feedback leanne.
i agree that it can go and even be changed.