A senryu:
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I.E.D. blossom
dead soldiers bent and broken-
seeds of destruction
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(10-21-2012, 10:14 AM)billy Wrote:  I.E.D. blossom
dead soldiers bent and broken-
seeds of destruction

Clever use of irony and it delivers that small moment that makes your inside lurch a little. Thanks TOMH
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thanks for the feedback TOMH.
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i been thinking about this for a bit tbh

at first i hated it the use of blossom to describe somthing so heinous, felt really uncomfy with it
but now am thinking well isnt that the point..we should feel uncomfy with it

so now i really like it...wotch this space

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