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You warm up my heart

You warm up my heart
haymanali
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#1
10-22-2012, 11:08 PM
Your icy blue eyes
softly illumine my life
and warm up my heart
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#2
10-23-2012, 06:53 AM
i like the way you used illumine instead of illuminated in order to keep it at 7 sills.
nice contrast with icy and warm being used for the same thing.
good to see you posting .
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#3
11-02-2012, 04:33 AM
I also fancy the contrast. Nice piece, and welcome to the Pig.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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#4
11-02-2012, 09:18 AM
I liked it (on facebook Smile )

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#5
11-02-2012, 03:15 PM
A sweet, cozy piece Smile
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#6
11-11-2012, 12:47 AM
I really liked this
As well as agreeing with the above comments i liked it because it brought to mind the transition from winter to spring. from uninvested to in a relationship. Living in isolation (like an iceberg in the sea) to being in a community.
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