If you want something
And that something is someone
It is not something
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i'm not sure the last line is as solid as it first seemed when i read it.
then again i suppose a some is not a something to be owned.
thought provoking
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(10-26-2012, 07:02 PM)ddtankerz Wrote: If you want something
And that something is someone
It is not something or Is it not something
by swaping the statement to a question you let the reader decide / ponder. Thanks I enjoyed this made my think.
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(10-26-2012, 07:02 PM)ddtankerz Wrote: If you want something
And that something is someone
It is not something
Good meaning behind it, but it could use a different approach rather than telling us, show us with visual descriptions and metaphors and what not. Hope this helps!
