The urge:

[billy]

two red butterfly's
flutter down the garden path-
where's my watercolours?

[Keith]

two red butterfly's
flutter down the garden path-
where's my watercolours?

Nice image, dont see many red admirals these days but I did today thanks TOMH

[Thomas.c.Batten]

good use of kiro, feel the last line is missing something though, but what? i am unsure. a good start, thanks for the read

[billy]

thanks for the feedback