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11-26-2012, 11:34 AM
(This post was last modified: 11-26-2012, 11:51 AM by billy.)
Fields are flooded
Rice is planted shoot by shoot-
frogs croak
revision
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Fields are flooded
Rice is planted shoot by shoot-
Back muscles ache
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Would this be a senryu (the back ache part)?
Do you need the are and the is?
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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11-26-2012, 11:39 AM
(This post was last modified: 11-26-2012, 11:51 AM by billy.)
possible though if it's real, it's a fact., i verge on you been right though so i'l do an edit
