2nd Haiku

[brandontoh]

This one's untitled. I'm not sure I'm getting the hang of writing Haiku, but I hope I'm grasping the essence better now.

Scarlet sunset
Paints the town a pastel hue
As life starts to slow

[billy]

yeah, i think you're getting it more or less.

the cut shouldn't be a carry on sentence though, it should be a statement of sorts. a great effort.

Scarlet sunset
Paints the town a pastel hue
life starts to slow