Age of Consent

[Todd]

In South Carolina,
it's how fast
you can go.
Like the speed
limit, no one cares
if there are no cops
watching.

[cidermaid]

How true
Especially so for the younger generation crime or a sin is only such if it is witnessed or caught.
(oh no I'm sounding like a grumpy old woman...oh well I'm 50 in a couple of years....I might as well start practicing spitting and swearing to get in some practice and I already think I look good in purple!)

[heslopian]

Funny and short as it is, this feels like a poem which would do well in the actual critique sections. It's humour is bitter and moralistic, and in its free verse way it's beautifully arranged. Thank you for the read

[Keith]

Life in the fast lane, Heslopian has the words, I've come back to this a few times, because I enjoy it.

[Todd]

Thank you all (cider, jack, ToMH), I appreciate the comments. Maybe I will move this one day to a critique forum.