my friends
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Transvestites who suck
hairy lolypops without
protection from wolves
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#2
love it! usually i am not that much into haikus but this one creates a very strong picture. It is honest and naked and beautiful. i was a little confused about the suck though. do your friends suck or do they suck the lollypops? sure i guess you ment the second. it's a nicely weird bridge that made me dizz for a second.
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(01-12-2013, 06:29 PM)aaron Wrote:  Transvestites who suck
hairy lolypops without
protection from wolves

Rather interesting, and sounds quite strong. I like the irony, good job Thumbsup
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