A Hobby

[billy]

large nets in summer
admirals in wild pasture--
butterflies on cork

[brandontoh]

large nets in summer
admirals in wild pasture--
butterflys on cork

When I saw that you started the thread and the title, I expected something frisky. Darn.

Anyways, I really like the imagery here. How the first line sets the mood, with summer and large nets. The second line sets the scenery, the macro side of things, and the last line moves in for a close up; a beautiful finishing touch. Though I'm used to spelling the plural of butterfly as 'butterflies'. Also, I've been wondering, what are the 2 dashes for? Is it an actual punctuation mark? Been seeing those a lot lately.

[billy]

i was going to do one about cow shit in farm yards and call it Eau de toilette

good catch on butterflies, i've fixed it. the two dashes aren't really needed, it's to denote where the cut is in the haiku. thanks for the feedback.

[brandontoh]

i was going to do one about cow shit in farm yards and call it Eau de toilette

good catch on butterflies, i've fixed it. the two dashes aren't really needed, it's to denote where the cut is in the haiku. thanks for the feedback.

You can do one now. =P Oh I see~ Thanks for clarifying. =)