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a haiku

a haiku
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#1
03-07-2013, 08:59 PM
The hummingbird hangs
above the honeysuckle
i piss on the hedge.
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#2
03-08-2013, 05:01 AM
A visual feast, with smells as well. Lovely. Do hedges grow better with piss? They seem to thrive wherever drunkards loiter. I have a rather perverse need to know if the hummingbird provided a challenging target.
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#3
03-08-2013, 05:28 AM
only if the hover near the bell end Blush
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#4
03-08-2013, 05:43 AM
good vibrations?
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