Split me open

[Truerenigma]

This is not bad, may need a couple more revisions, mostly to edit the punctuation, fix some of the abstactions and cliches, but for some reason the meter made it stick in my head.

[serge gurkski]

tommy. let me row back a bit; my last comments had nothing to do with your poem really. My apologies.

serge

[Tommy]

tommy. let me row back a bit; my last comments had nothing to do with your poem really. My apologies.

serge

No need for apology Serge. It's all in good fun.

[serge gurkski]

thank you!