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grace you from the clouds loved as one of their own
beauty comes in darkness silver tone
'you are the one'
soon you'll be gone
he's coming to town he's coming to town
'we've got to get it on'
after all you're my boss in bed an equal flickering flame.
still waiting on him he gave you a ring
crush
taken you at will and see you on CSI as a blond
the voice of an angel' it's you I'm talking to'
love for a day for a night
'William Shakespeare had it right'
to be or not to be is the question
good luck good day good night!.
There's a few typos in there.
Maybe Shakespeare's thing about dying a thousand deaths might be more appropriate according to filthy rumours. But being appropriate gets in the way sometimes.
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(03-20-2013, 05:31 AM)rowens Wrote: There's a few typos in there.
Maybe Shakespeare's thing about dying a thousand deaths might be more appropriate according to filthy rumours. But being appropriate gets in the way sometimes.
Hi
Can you point out the typeos
Thanks for commenting
grace you from the clouds loved as one of their own
beauty comes in darkness sliver tone
Do you mean "sliver"? Or 'silver'?
'your the one'
You are, or you're
soon you'll be gone
he's coming to town he's coming to town
'we've got to get it on'
after all you'er my boss in bed an equal flickering flame.
The "you're" here.
still waiting on him he gave you a ring
crush
I take you at my will and see you on CSI as a blond
the voice of an angel'it's you I'm talking to'
Maybe a space after "angel".
love for a day for a night
'William Shakespeare had it right'
to be or not to be is the question
good luck good day good night!.
When it comes to the punctuation, I don't know how you want to have it. I just assumed certain things were typos.
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(03-20-2013, 09:58 PM)rowens Wrote: grace you from the clouds loved as one of their own
beauty comes in darkness sliver tone
Do you mean "sliver"? Or 'silver'?
'your the one'
You are, or you're
Thanks very much for correcting the typos
soon you'll be gone
he's coming to town he's coming to town
'we've got to get it on'
after all you'er my boss in bed an equal flickering flame.
The "you're" here.
still waiting on him he gave you a ring
crush
I take you at my will and see you on CSI as a blond
the voice of an angel'it's you I'm talking to'
Maybe a space after "angel".
love for a day for a night
'William Shakespeare had it right'
to be or not to be is the question
good luck good day good night!.
When it comes to the punctuation, I don't know how you want to have it. I just assumed certain things were typos.
(03-21-2013, 03:24 AM)Mattie Wrote: (03-20-2013, 09:58 PM)rowens Wrote: grace you from the clouds loved as one of their own
beauty comes in darkness sliver tone
Do you mean "sliver"? Or 'silver'?
'your the one'
You are, or you're
Thanks very much for correcting the typos
soon you'll be gone
he's coming to town he's coming to town
'we've got to get it on'
after all you'er my boss in bed an equal flickering flame.
The "you're" here.
still waiting on him he gave you a ring
crush
I take you at my will and see you on CSI as a blond
the voice of an angel'it's you I'm talking to'
Maybe a space after "angel".
love for a day for a night
'William Shakespeare had it right'
to be or not to be is the question
good luck good day good night!.
When it comes to the punctuation, I don't know how you want to have it. I just assumed certain things were typos.
Rowens thank you ver much for helping out with my mistakes.
Regards
Mattie
