Gone

[saeity]

He devours in one
bite, thoughtfully chews upon.
Throws up and spits out!

[Heartafire]

He devours in one
bite, thoughtfully chews upon.
Throws up and spits out!

Hi Saeity, I like this, the message. I love haiku/senryu and all the form controversy that comes with it. I prefer minimal wording. I might pare this to:
devoured
chewed up
spit out
a thought to be binned at will. Again, let me say how much I enjoyed this.
Heart

[softlyfalling]

At the risk of finding out I missed the whole point, I am going to suggest that you omit the "throwing up" chapter. Here is why, above and beyond throw up being EEWWWWWW....I am thinking this is some sort of statement of greed, ingratitude and imperious disdain for life...the perpetrator consumes greedily, sucks out the life, and then spits out the ruined result. Kind of like big business.

[Soaring Eagle]

Totally enjoyed this Haiku saeity. For me it created a vivid picture in my mind. For me it seems to convey the message that what he at one point considered to be satisfying is no longer so hence leading to throwing it up. Lovely job with this piece.

Blessings,
Soaring Eagle