Leviathan

[RiverNotch]

I know nothing moves:
impulses always flowing,
currents always still

[Lizzie]

I know nothing moves:
impulses always flowing,
currents always still

I don't think you need the 2 always's -- I don't see how it's beneficial as opposed to saying "impulses flow" "currents lay still", or something to that effect. But, I certainly wouldn't have two of them.