05-13-2013, 10:11 PM
hi J
at first glance I liked this a lot. but then I started trying to figure out what it meant. is it that "her" painting affects "you" more deeply than her lipstick or your blood? that's the only sensible idea I could find, and honestly it seems a bit trite. the writing is nice but the meaning is muddled. rework?
-cloudy
at first glance I liked this a lot. but then I started trying to figure out what it meant. is it that "her" painting affects "you" more deeply than her lipstick or your blood? that's the only sensible idea I could find, and honestly it seems a bit trite. the writing is nice but the meaning is muddled. rework?
-cloudy
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.