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Awakening
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05-14-2013, 02:14 AM
(05-13-2013, 12:25 PM)jkaram Wrote: More than her lipstickHi, I've read this a few times now, and though I like what you've written, I simply can't figure out what you mean exactly. The lines feel somehow disconnected from each other, and vague too. JMHO, of course. -LB |
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RE: Awakening - by qwerty_H - 05-13-2013, 07:06 PM
RE: Awakening - by jkaram - 05-13-2013, 07:13 PM
RE: Awakening - by Samuel.K123 - 05-13-2013, 07:32 PM
RE: Awakening - by justcloudy - 05-13-2013, 10:11 PM
RE: Awakening - by Volaticus - 05-14-2013, 02:14 AM
RE: Awakening - by jkaram - 05-14-2013, 11:44 AM
RE: Awakening - by KICKBACK - 05-14-2013, 12:57 PM
RE: Awakening - by Sam33lynn - 05-14-2013, 12:47 PM
RE: Awakening - by billy - 05-15-2013, 02:59 PM
RE: Awakening - by jkaram - 05-16-2013, 07:03 PM
RE: Awakening - by jkaram - 05-18-2013, 09:14 PM
RE: Awakening - by Zerric - 05-18-2013, 11:45 PM
RE: Awakening - by jkaram - 05-19-2013, 01:42 AM
RE: Awakening - by Zerric - 05-19-2013, 10:01 AM
RE: Awakening - by jkaram - 05-19-2013, 10:21 AM
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