Awakening

Awakening

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#12

05-18-2013, 09:14 PM

I've kept tcoming back to this poem and tinkering around with it. In the process, what I was trying to say has become clearer. So back to share the rewrite, thanks everyone for the honest feedback.

Red paint drying,
she remembers blue; Spring palette
canvas painting- you.

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Awakening - by jkaram - 05-13-2013, 12:25 PM

RE: Awakening - by qwerty_H - 05-13-2013, 07:06 PM

RE: Awakening - by jkaram - 05-13-2013, 07:13 PM

RE: Awakening - by Samuel.K123 - 05-13-2013, 07:32 PM

RE: Awakening - by justcloudy - 05-13-2013, 10:11 PM

RE: Awakening - by Volaticus - 05-14-2013, 02:14 AM

RE: Awakening - by jkaram - 05-14-2013, 11:44 AM

RE: Awakening - by KICKBACK - 05-14-2013, 12:57 PM

RE: Awakening - by Sam33lynn - 05-14-2013, 12:47 PM

RE: Awakening - by billy - 05-15-2013, 02:59 PM

RE: Awakening - by jkaram - 05-16-2013, 07:03 PM

RE: Awakening - by jkaram - 05-18-2013, 09:14 PM

RE: Awakening - by Zerric - 05-18-2013, 11:45 PM

RE: Awakening - by jkaram - 05-19-2013, 01:42 AM

RE: Awakening - by Zerric - 05-19-2013, 10:01 AM

RE: Awakening - by jkaram - 05-19-2013, 10:21 AM

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