05-19-2013, 10:01 AM
Hey sorry if i sounded a bit harsh 
not my intention. But the entire poem seems to have changed in the 2nd revision. I prefer the original, but ultimately, it is up to you to decide which you like the best.
Do artists redo a painting, just because someone didn't like it? or do they improve on the next painting?
^I don't actually know the answer to that, cuz I'm no artist, but I'd rather take these criticisms and help improve my writing overall, not focus on just one poem.
not my intention. But the entire poem seems to have changed in the 2nd revision. I prefer the original, but ultimately, it is up to you to decide which you like the best.Do artists redo a painting, just because someone didn't like it? or do they improve on the next painting?
^I don't actually know the answer to that, cuz I'm no artist, but I'd rather take these criticisms and help improve my writing overall, not focus on just one poem.