06-04-2013, 10:03 AM
Hi,
I don't really know what a tanka is, so I read this as a regular poem. I like the quirkiness; the funny tone of it.
The end of the first line might need a period or a comma.
Thanks for the read.
I don't really know what a tanka is, so I read this as a regular poem. I like the quirkiness; the funny tone of it.
The end of the first line might need a period or a comma.
Thanks for the read.