A Lifted Life of Leisure
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It might just be my small vocabulary (or that I live in England and have never seen the world happenstance before). It isn't necessarily that they are archaic words, they're good - but you can have too much of a good thing, and I think you do.

Toiling, stoic, etc - it's good you know the meaning and can use them, but you can't make a cake with only butter. I'd just swop a few for simpler things to build a bit of a better flow and understanding, and then throw in more formal words like that.
- Amy

(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)


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A Lifted Life of Leisure - by YaMarVa - 06-04-2013, 08:15 PM
RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by YaMarVa - 06-04-2013, 10:15 PM
RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by UnicornRainbowCake - 06-04-2013, 10:28 PM
RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by YaMarVa - 06-05-2013, 12:48 AM
RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by YaMarVa - 06-05-2013, 03:25 AM
RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by YaMarVa - 06-05-2013, 05:18 AM
RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by YaMarVa - 06-05-2013, 07:17 AM
RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by Rose Love - 06-05-2013, 06:21 AM
RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by milo - 06-05-2013, 06:35 AM
RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by YaMarVa - 06-05-2013, 07:25 AM
RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 09:11 AM
RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by YaMarVa - 06-05-2013, 11:36 AM
RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by Rose Love - 06-05-2013, 06:11 PM
RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by rowens - 06-06-2013, 12:46 AM
RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by YaMarVa - 06-06-2013, 01:20 AM
RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by Bunx - 06-06-2013, 01:33 AM
RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by rowens - 06-06-2013, 01:41 AM



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