A Lifted Life of Leisure

[YaMarVa]

I'm sure somebody will pick that up. I get about the nature and crops, that is clear enough, the rest of it - mainly the family - you might want to build on a bit more to make it clearer.

I tend to agree, I think I need to be clearer about the family and the varied agricultural conditions brought on by man in the early 20th century.
I think a second stanza, or splitting the current 2nd one, would be a good place to interject these topics?
Fortunately, I believe we are both correct about T.S., as both his descriptive word choice and displays of action are the reason I rank him in the high echelons of poetry.
Thanks for the reposed back and forth today, I appreciate your positive criticisms and allowing me to fine comb them as I am going to edit and move on to another poem.