A Lifted Life of Leisure

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A Lifted Life of Leisure

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06-05-2013, 09:11 AM

(06-05-2013, 07:25 AM)YaMarVa Wrote: Editing clearly is not my strong point, as I am new to poetry and writing as a whole (this was my 9th poem).

What about poem number LXIV?

Maybe they're all out of order. And that's what's confusing some people?

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A Lifted Life of Leisure - by YaMarVa - 06-04-2013, 08:15 PM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by UnicornRainbowCake - 06-04-2013, 09:55 PM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by YaMarVa - 06-04-2013, 10:15 PM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by UnicornRainbowCake - 06-04-2013, 10:28 PM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by YaMarVa - 06-05-2013, 12:48 AM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by UnicornRainbowCake - 06-05-2013, 02:34 AM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by YaMarVa - 06-05-2013, 03:25 AM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by UnicornRainbowCake - 06-05-2013, 03:49 AM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by YaMarVa - 06-05-2013, 05:18 AM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by UnicornRainbowCake - 06-05-2013, 05:31 AM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by YaMarVa - 06-05-2013, 07:17 AM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by Rose Love - 06-05-2013, 06:21 AM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by milo - 06-05-2013, 06:35 AM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by YaMarVa - 06-05-2013, 07:25 AM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by rowens - 06-05-2013, 09:11 AM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by YaMarVa - 06-05-2013, 11:36 AM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by Rose Love - 06-05-2013, 06:11 PM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by UnicornRainbowCake - 06-05-2013, 07:20 AM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by rowens - 06-06-2013, 12:46 AM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by YaMarVa - 06-06-2013, 01:20 AM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by Bunx - 06-06-2013, 01:33 AM

RE: A Lifted Life of Leisure - by rowens - 06-06-2013, 01:41 AM

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