A Lifted Life of Leisure

[Rose Love]

Editing clearly is not my strong point, as I am new to poetry and writing as a whole (this was my 9th poem).

Well, you're in luck, then, because it is part of my profession--spotting grammatical, orthographical and general linguistic errors...and when not work-related, keeping them like deep, dark secrets to myself, because people get really bent out of shape when you correct their language.

IMO, more important than a person's current level of writing or editing skills, is their desire to improve their skills, so I'm glad you didn't get upset by my comments, because it speaks well of you and, secondly, because, like I said, I don't like to draw attention to grammar and spelling and other linguistic errors, not just on this site, but generally in life, because it brings about such a negative response from people.