Short poem
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(06-29-2013, 07:46 AM)Volaticus Wrote:  
Patroller of paths,
antennas eager;
the sneaking snail.

Slider on slime
a foot a minute;
Gotcha!

....I'm the catcher in the rye!

Liked it,vol, for its alliterative content and boy, that semi colon puts it right up thereSmile
Yes to this. Now, about the use of metaldehydes....
Best,
tectak
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Short poem - by Volaticus - 06-29-2013, 07:46 AM
RE: Short poem - by Leanne - 06-29-2013, 07:48 AM
RE: Short poem - by Volaticus - 06-30-2013, 03:49 AM
RE: Short poem - by tectak - 06-29-2013, 08:15 AM
RE: Short poem - by billy - 06-29-2013, 09:07 AM



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