06-29-2013, 09:07 AM
excellent. as leanne said the alliteration makes it bigger than it is and that's quite a feet in such a small poem
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Short poem - by Volaticus - 06-29-2013, 07:46 AM
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RE: Short poem - by tectak - 06-29-2013, 08:15 AM
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