Where are you?
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That was hawt, there is sadness here too all the sexuality kind of surfs upon it. It's pretty graphic even for my taste and I consider myself a fucked up guy generally I was like ''whoa, slow down'' reading this but still, tasteful somehow.
I dig a lot of lines in here
''Peace from the clumsy hands of a one night stand and the catholic guilt after'' heavy feels, mate.
I could never write a poem this long and be consistent so big up yoself. Also, I like how you start and end with the same line, like a frame
love is for assholes
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Where are you? - by missemilyrose - 07-11-2013, 12:40 AM
RE: Where are you? - by hardon - 07-11-2013, 12:56 AM
RE: Where are you? - by missemilyrose - 07-11-2013, 01:24 AM
RE: Where are you? - by Vistaldust - 07-11-2013, 02:11 AM



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