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[missemilyrose]

That was hawt, there is sadness here too all the sexuality kind of surfs upon it. It's pretty graphic even for my taste and I consider myself a fucked up guy generally I was like ''whoa, slow down'' reading this but still, tasteful somehow.
I dig a lot of lines in here
''Peace from the clumsy hands of a one night stand and the catholic guilt after'' heavy feels, mate.
I could never write a poem this long and be consistent so big up yoself. Also, I like how you start and end with the same line, like a frame

Aww thanks, consistency doesn't come easy to me but I wrote it so quickly and still half asleep so it managed to work out.
I wasn't going to post it because of its sexual nature but anything I write comes from a bit deeper so its not going to be pornographic.
This is the first time I've had a poem read for public consumption so it is appreciated!
thank you