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Silence
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08-18-2013, 04:40 AM
I've never critiqued a poem here before, but great poem! The poem expresses the feeling of silence and what the experience was in your silence, well. Or at least it was done well enough for me to enjoy. In the last stanza, I want you to show tears so badly, but isn't that what this poems about? Thanks for sharing.
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Silence - by SunRose - 08-15-2013, 11:36 AM
RE: Silence - by Volaticus - 08-15-2013, 12:30 PM
RE: Silence - by ChristopherSea - 08-15-2013, 09:32 PM
RE: Silence - by 1skylande1 - 08-17-2013, 05:50 PM
RE: Silence - by FlipFlop - 08-18-2013, 04:40 AM
RE: Silence - by TheWall0912 - 08-19-2013, 09:18 PM
RE: Silence - by lukeJones - 08-20-2013, 11:37 PM
RE: Silence - by Bunx - 08-21-2013, 07:36 AM
RE: Silence - by billy - 08-21-2013, 09:58 AM
RE: Silence - by FayandFire - 08-22-2013, 10:55 AM
RE: Silence - by mwhite0017 - 08-29-2013, 11:30 AM
RE: Silence - by cheyrn - 01-08-2014, 08:47 PM
RE: Silence - by Destructed - 01-11-2014, 10:43 AM
RE: Silence - by teejai - 01-12-2014, 12:27 PM
RE: Silence - by tomoffing - 01-12-2014, 08:29 PM
RE: Silence - by Mikeodial - 01-16-2014, 11:49 AM
RE: Silence - by Blake - 01-17-2014, 07:40 AM
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