Silence

Silence

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08-21-2013, 07:36 AM

sunrose! glad i found one of your poems for a few reasons!
the first has been already stated, further punctuation could be beneficial.
the subject matter is a really sad one at that but it gives the reader a unique perspective that is needed.
thanks alot for the poem

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Silence - by SunRose - 08-15-2013, 11:36 AM

RE: Silence - by Volaticus - 08-15-2013, 12:30 PM

RE: Silence - by ChristopherSea - 08-15-2013, 09:32 PM

RE: Silence - by 1skylande1 - 08-17-2013, 05:50 PM

RE: Silence - by FlipFlop - 08-18-2013, 04:40 AM

RE: Silence - by TheWall0912 - 08-19-2013, 09:18 PM

RE: Silence - by lukeJones - 08-20-2013, 11:37 PM

RE: Silence - by Bunx - 08-21-2013, 07:36 AM

RE: Silence - by billy - 08-21-2013, 09:58 AM

RE: Silence - by FayandFire - 08-22-2013, 10:55 AM

RE: Silence - by mwhite0017 - 08-29-2013, 11:30 AM

RE: Silence - by cheyrn - 01-08-2014, 08:47 PM

RE: Silence - by Destructed - 01-11-2014, 10:43 AM

RE: Silence - by teejai - 01-12-2014, 12:27 PM

RE: Silence - by tomoffing - 01-12-2014, 08:29 PM

RE: Silence - by Mikeodial - 01-16-2014, 11:49 AM

RE: Silence - by Blake - 01-17-2014, 07:40 AM

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