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08-29-2013, 11:30 AM
Hi, I'm new so my crit isn't going to sound overly professional, my apologies! I love this poem, there's so much feeling in it! But I feel like the punctuation is a little off, and that can be of great importance, especially to a writer. Maybe, have a friend check over it quickly for minor errors like those if you aren't good with punctuation. (I know I'm not any good with it either!) You've also got some great description words! Keep writing, I love this!
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Silence - by SunRose - 08-15-2013, 11:36 AM
RE: Silence - by Volaticus - 08-15-2013, 12:30 PM
RE: Silence - by ChristopherSea - 08-15-2013, 09:32 PM
RE: Silence - by 1skylande1 - 08-17-2013, 05:50 PM
RE: Silence - by FlipFlop - 08-18-2013, 04:40 AM
RE: Silence - by TheWall0912 - 08-19-2013, 09:18 PM
RE: Silence - by lukeJones - 08-20-2013, 11:37 PM
RE: Silence - by Bunx - 08-21-2013, 07:36 AM
RE: Silence - by billy - 08-21-2013, 09:58 AM
RE: Silence - by FayandFire - 08-22-2013, 10:55 AM
RE: Silence - by mwhite0017 - 08-29-2013, 11:30 AM
RE: Silence - by cheyrn - 01-08-2014, 08:47 PM
RE: Silence - by Destructed - 01-11-2014, 10:43 AM
RE: Silence - by teejai - 01-12-2014, 12:27 PM
RE: Silence - by tomoffing - 01-12-2014, 08:29 PM
RE: Silence - by Mikeodial - 01-16-2014, 11:49 AM
RE: Silence - by Blake - 01-17-2014, 07:40 AM
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