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Night Out
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09-13-2013, 11:42 PM
These kinds of poems you've been writing are growing with you. With the first two lines, I was thinking it was going to go somewhere with both a train and a train of thought. I missed a train of thought when I stopped to think; that's interesting. Did you mean to do what you did with Sleep and finished, instead of slept? It's not incorrect the way you have it, depending on how you read it. At least not for me. But what was your idea with that?
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RE: Night Out - by leftover sushi - 09-13-2013, 11:38 PM
RE: Night Out - by rowens - 09-13-2013, 11:42 PM
RE: Night Out - by Wjames - 09-13-2013, 11:54 PM
RE: Night Out - by rowens - 09-14-2013, 12:01 AM
RE: Night Out - by ScurryFunger - 09-15-2013, 01:29 AM
RE: Night Out - by Wjames - 09-15-2013, 02:44 AM
RE: Night Out - by rowens - 09-15-2013, 02:03 AM
RE: Night Out - by ScurryFunger - 09-16-2013, 02:36 AM
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