09-24-2013, 09:16 AM
Hi Jim, enjoyed the grouchy mood, from a distance. 
While I'm pretty poor at hacking lines out of my poems, I think it might work for your last line S5.
Just leave me alone.
I really don't care.
Stay out of my way.
I'll get breakfast somewhere.
Just a thought
While I'm pretty poor at hacking lines out of my poems, I think it might work for your last line S5.
Just leave me alone.
I really don't care.
Stay out of my way.
I'll get breakfast somewhere.
Just a thought
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