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Eternal sentinels
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09-26-2013, 09:04 AM
(09-25-2013, 05:37 AM)mortal Wrote: wow. Read it couple of times. Touching and powerful ending with last two lines. Personally I do not see anything to change. It works for me as it is.Hello Mortal, Thanks for the kind words. TOMH If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out |
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Eternal sentinels - by Keith - 09-20-2013, 07:33 AM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by ellajam - 09-20-2013, 10:47 AM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by Keith - 09-21-2013, 03:25 AM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by abigailholloway - 09-20-2013, 01:15 PM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by cidermaid - 09-22-2013, 01:27 AM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by Keith - 09-22-2013, 07:25 AM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by cidermaid - 09-22-2013, 05:29 PM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by Keith - 09-24-2013, 05:16 AM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by bena - 09-23-2013, 06:06 AM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by mortal - 09-25-2013, 05:37 AM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by Keith - 09-26-2013, 09:04 AM
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