09-27-2013, 01:51 PM
The problem with this poem is that it isn't really funny. I think it had the potential to be funny, but it just never really made it. What Leanne said probably had a lot to do with it, plus there was really nothing light to play off against. The last line should have been funny, but it just came out as mean.
Dale
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.