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The Doctrine Pedlar -edited
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04-11-2014, 06:48 AM
(04-11-2014, 04:49 AM)aniketk Wrote: I like the story style method of yours.This is not considered adequate review for the critical forums. Please read the poem carefully several times and note areas that work and don't work and why. Thanks. Note: i am leaving this post up, but you have posted 6 other similar comments that I am deleting. /mod |
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The Doctrine Pedlar -edited - by Mopkins - 04-09-2014, 06:13 PM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by JakMak - 04-09-2014, 09:34 PM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by Mopkins - 04-09-2014, 11:01 PM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by JakMak - 04-10-2014, 01:18 AM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by Blake - 04-10-2014, 01:34 AM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by Mopkins - 04-10-2014, 02:27 AM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by Leanne - 04-10-2014, 03:50 AM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by Erthona - 04-10-2014, 09:29 AM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by Leanne - 04-10-2014, 09:49 AM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by Erthona - 04-10-2014, 12:05 PM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by micpschm - 04-10-2014, 02:12 PM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by Mopkins - 04-10-2014, 04:42 PM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by kindofahippy - 04-10-2014, 05:36 PM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by Mopkins - 04-10-2014, 07:04 PM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by Leanne - 04-10-2014, 07:16 PM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by Mopkins - 04-10-2014, 07:35 PM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by Leanne - 04-10-2014, 07:43 PM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by Mopkins - 04-10-2014, 08:23 PM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by milo - 04-10-2014, 10:58 PM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by aniketk - 04-11-2014, 04:49 AM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by milo - 04-11-2014, 06:48 AM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by Leanne - 04-12-2014, 08:01 AM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by Mopkins - 04-12-2014, 08:21 AM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by Leanne - 04-12-2014, 08:22 AM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by Mopkins - 04-12-2014, 08:47 AM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by Leanne - 04-12-2014, 08:48 AM
RE: The Doctrine Pedlar - by Mopkins - 04-12-2014, 09:07 AM
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