Lies, lies, lies

[tectak]

A beautiful fallacy woven together with silken strings of white,
Neatly laid across your heart, and stitched on tight
A lovely little falsity, better yet, a lovely little fable...
Preying on the minds of the young, the weak, the ready willing and able.
a travesty believed to be a gift from his benevolent grace,
A chemical imbalance, an imperfection, a deceitful disgrace.
Do not be fooled by this malevolent waste,
Free yourself of these lies tight embrace.
This lie is a virus passed amongst society much like H.I.V.
Only the virus that I speak of is spelled L. O. V. E.

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No meter, dramatic, bad end rhymes... I know, I know..

Hi ryan,
Almost all been said but do watch out for bizarre over-modifiers...benevolent grace, deceitful disgrace ( horrid rhyme), malevolent waste. The padded out lines are always a problem when you don't know what to put in them but have to think of something.
Again, I hear commitment verse. This is my downfall, too. When you have a good idea for an ending you aim for it like a bloody accelerating Exocet...you get there and BANG! It's all over and we are covered in cliche confetti...mixing metaphors is also one of my problems... my back is much better, thank you.
Best,
tectak