Blanket State

[Bunx]

thanks for the feed back! the poem can use a little tinkering.
@RiverNotch- which stanzas do you feel give the reader a sense of hope
@rowens- thanks for the feedback. it is the first poem i have written in a while, i am glad it doesn't completely stink. ill tinker around with the first stanza and see if i can come up with something a little less akward