When the insomniacs & thinkers
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This piece has a good internal flow. Good use of fresh words. I love.."..orchid sky...journey the celestial moments of higher fields." Is "tighten" a play on Titan? If so its cute I don't know because it seems you've used a verb as an adjective. A wonderful theme, here. Speaking of higher realms. Tell you the truth. I really like this.
Thanks for a beautiful read. I look forward to your next post.
p
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When the insomniacs & thinkers - by Alexearth - 07-26-2014, 08:47 PM
RE: When the insomniacs & thinkers - by poe - 07-26-2014, 09:13 PM
RE: When the insomniacs & thinkers - by Alexearth - 07-27-2014, 08:06 PM
RE: When the insomniacs & thinkers - by billy - 07-27-2014, 08:19 PM
RE: When the insomniacs & thinkers - by Alexearth - 07-27-2014, 09:40 PM
RE: When the insomniacs & thinkers - by poe - 07-29-2014, 02:16 AM
RE: When the insomniacs & thinkers - by Alexearth - 08-04-2014, 04:22 AM



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