Where I'm From

Where I'm From

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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12-26-2015, 05:41 PM

i enjoyed the poem, one of the better of this type. i particularly liked the te ching couplet.

for me you use to many [I'm]'s would it read better with just the one to start each stanza?

are you from earth or possibly liverpool.

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Where I'm From - by shurgaree - 12-26-2015, 04:06 PM

RE: Where Are You From? - by billy - 12-26-2015, 05:41 PM

RE: Where Are You From? - by rayheinrich - 12-26-2015, 08:23 PM

RE: Where Are You From? - by shurgaree - 12-26-2015, 11:18 PM

RE: Where Are You From? - by rayheinrich - 12-27-2015, 02:53 AM

RE: Where I'm From - by Achebe - 01-03-2016, 10:16 AM

RE: Where I'm From - by billy - 01-03-2016, 11:18 AM

RE: Where I'm From - by Mcfair - 01-03-2016, 08:10 PM

RE: Where I'm From - by Erthona - 01-03-2016, 10:02 PM

RE: Where I'm From - by shurgaree - 01-05-2016, 10:10 AM

RE: Where I'm From - by PoetCraft - 01-05-2016, 04:51 PM

RE: Where I'm From - by shurgaree - 01-06-2016, 03:36 AM

RE: Where I'm From - by Erthona - 01-06-2016, 03:34 AM

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