Where I'm From
#6
"The River Ganges of Rishikesh and Varanasi
where I saw that beauty could be either see-through turquoise or murky and abrasive, just the same"

to be really pedantic about it, for see-through turquoise, you'll have to venture further upriver beyond devprayag.
liked the "sore bones" line, but "focus" suggests sight, not feeling.

nice read.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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Where I'm From - by shurgaree - 12-26-2015, 04:06 PM
RE: Where Are You From? - by billy - 12-26-2015, 05:41 PM
RE: Where Are You From? - by rayheinrich - 12-26-2015, 08:23 PM
RE: Where Are You From? - by shurgaree - 12-26-2015, 11:18 PM
RE: Where Are You From? - by rayheinrich - 12-27-2015, 02:53 AM
RE: Where I'm From - by Achebe - 01-03-2016, 10:16 AM
RE: Where I'm From - by billy - 01-03-2016, 11:18 AM
RE: Where I'm From - by Mcfair - 01-03-2016, 08:10 PM
RE: Where I'm From - by Erthona - 01-03-2016, 10:02 PM
RE: Where I'm From - by shurgaree - 01-05-2016, 10:10 AM
RE: Where I'm From - by PoetCraft - 01-05-2016, 04:51 PM
RE: Where I'm From - by shurgaree - 01-06-2016, 03:36 AM
RE: Where I'm From - by Erthona - 01-06-2016, 03:34 AM



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