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09-09-2016, 07:19 AM

(09-08-2016, 01:32 PM)RiverNotch Wrote: .. it just felt like a drag.

ha..drag

river's got it though; the first line is slapped in the face by the 2nd and 3rd, like an anti-drug PSA. strong lines though

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Haiku - by Keith - 09-08-2016, 09:04 AM

RE: Haiku - by just mercedes - 09-08-2016, 09:28 AM

RE: Haiku - by Keith - 09-09-2016, 09:02 PM

RE: Haiku - by Achebe - 09-08-2016, 09:38 AM

RE: Haiku - by RiverNotch - 09-08-2016, 01:32 PM

RE: Haiku - by kolemath - 09-09-2016, 07:19 AM

RE: Haiku - by RiverNotch - 09-09-2016, 09:29 PM

RE: Haiku - by Magpie - 09-09-2016, 09:38 PM

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