11-01-2016, 09:01 PM
Carrying or something that means that might be nice. Imagining has that dreaming quality to it, a word many find too soft, too abstract and nonspecfic (a road doesn't imagine though in a poem it might 
) but I sort of like it, though I think when I replace one of those with something sharper it tightens the piece up a bit. We need a shrugging smilie. Hi, 71.
While I'm here, there are so many options for standing, it's an interesting choice to think about. Strong image with a lot of emotion under the simplicity.
) but I sort of like it, though I think when I replace one of those with something sharper it tightens the piece up a bit. We need a shrugging smilie. Hi, 71.While I'm here, there are so many options for standing, it's an interesting choice to think about. Strong image with a lot of emotion under the simplicity.
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