Lifespans

[Sparkydashforth]

I like how this does not Tell, but simply states.

A minute’s a day for mosquitos,................................tempting to muse on time here, but you resisted.
a month is a year for a dog........................................this could be accused of being obvious, but what makes this work attractive
is its obvious observations.
An hour is ten breaths for a redwood,.......................Time is relative --- maybe an aunt or a nephew
a life is a wink for a log..............................is the log alive, lets say yes and no....maybe two winks

Enjoyed