12-09-2016, 06:01 AM
Thanks for your thoughts.
The plural was really just for the meter, but I also rarely think of mosquitos & insects as singular.
I wanted the log to represent death (a dead redwood), I don't know if it works, though. If I read it without knowing my intentions, it might seem like actually being the "life" of a log.
The plural was really just for the meter, but I also rarely think of mosquitos & insects as singular.
I wanted the log to represent death (a dead redwood), I don't know if it works, though. If I read it without knowing my intentions, it might seem like actually being the "life" of a log.